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Odyssey into 2012 chapter six: The Zephyr Key

by ~akatony1

Kaylin struggled with doubt. The fear of what she had done set into her thoughts, piercing her with worry. She knew Darus would fight her at every turn, but she had fought off herself from different dimensions. She had absorbed their knowledge, turning it into her own strength.
Powers stronger than any she'd ever known now coursed through her. She knew that this was not Zephyr. She'd absorbed the powers of alternate dimensions. Notus, Boreas, and Eurus. These three powers had been added to hers, and it frightened her.
The light train struggled against her. Darus was trying to fight back. She concentrated her powers, all four, into the next gate. It appeared before her, beckoning her to pass through, but Darus stopped the light train.
"You think you've won?" Kaylin smarted to him.
"I know I've won Kaylin, though, I never suspected you would wipe your own memory." He appeared in the train with her, holding the same sword he had killed countless innocent people with.
"Your tyranny ends here!" Kaylin summoned her energies again, and the light train passed through the gate, flinging Darus from the train.
Kaylin pulled out the book of timelines. Her odds were considerably better, but still grim. She flipped through it, trying to find anything that would help her with her quest. Then she found the notes:

Darus has found the Zephyr key. He sealed the eight gates, rendering it to its weakest state. He plans to destroy it on midnight of New Years eve. Such a trauma to the Earth would cause it to implode, killing everyone. I must report back to others.

Kaylin flipped through to the last entry in the book:

Darus has killed everyone. Kaylin is all that's left of our group. She disappeared a month ago. If I can find her, all may not be lost. I have to tell her that by passing through the eight gates their seal will break, and the Zephyr key, no, the world, can be saved.

She closed the notebook. This is what he had planned. He had hoped she could release all the seals. She only hoped his trust hadn't been misguided.
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I think the story is progressing excelently. I liked the last chapter a lot, especially her fighting herself, showing a little bit of an inward delimma. I felt that Darus would've been surprised by her actions, but he still has an overbearing confidence in himself. Fortunately for Kaylin, he doesn't know of her knew powers, which is why she was able to push through the gate and force him from the train. The Zephyr key is an idea I came up with because of the midnight on new years eve thing. Something dramatic needs to happen, and so The Zephyr key appeared in my mind. Notus, Boreas, and Eulus are the other names for greek winds, which stresses that the powers she gained were not just Zephyr, but alternate versions of it.
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~Piezelle Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist
Greek mythology added to it? Cool :)

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Mood: Wow! ~KaiDarknight Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I am awed to this chapter and congrats for being chosen :D

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-Robin/Dick Grayson from Young Justice ep 3 "Welcome to Happy Harbor"</i>
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~akatony1 Dec 26, 2011  Student
thanks :D
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~KaiDarknight Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :D

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Never leave home without it. First thing Batman taught me.
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Your Chapter added a lot more to the ending, lol. Great job!
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~akatony1 Dec 25, 2011  Student
Thanks a ton :D
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You're welcome!
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~Sayuri14 Dec 25, 2011  Student Writer
Congrats on being picked :) Your piece is truly different from others

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~akatony1 Dec 25, 2011  Student
thanks :D
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~CrystalClear12 Dec 24, 2011  Student Writer
The Anemoi Greek wind gods are there? And the Anemoi of the west wind is Zephyrus not Zephyr...
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